Aheila’s Drabble Day – Guest

Argh, I forgot to schedule this for yesterday.

Good day everybody – as always, here is my drabble for the week. I get these drabble challenges from Aheila’s website.

 Remember how it works?

  • Read the prompt and find your angle.
  • Write a drabble (100 words story, give or take five words).
  • Post a direct link to your drabble in the comments (or, if you don’t have a blog, just go ahead and post your drabble in the comments).
  • In the post on your blog, make sure to link back to this post.

Today’s prompt is: Guest!
And the extra challenge for points no one keeps track of: avoid the “unwanted guest” twist!


“Well doctor,” Mr. Jones said looking pale and worried. “Can you tell me what’s wrong with me? Can you tell me why I’ve been feeling so ill the past couple of weeks?”

Dr. Smith went to his notes, his face tight with concentration. “Well, just to recap, you’ve been experiencing diarrhoea, abdominal pain, you’ve lost a lot of weight, you’re always tired and this week you’ve noticed that the whites of your eyes have gone yellow…”

“I know what I had Doctor,” Mr. Jones said irritated. “Just tell me what I have!”

The doctor looked up from his notes and smiled slightly. “And unwanted guest,” he said. “You’re condition is called clonorchiasis… Otherwise known as Liver Fluke infection…”



10 thoughts on “Aheila’s Drabble Day – Guest

  1. Jenn June 29, 2011 / 4:58 pm

    Dude! That sucks!!! I sure hope you’re not trying to tell us something!

    • mish June 29, 2011 / 7:21 pm

      LOL !! Had a good chuckle ! Nice way of putting it !

      • Alyssa July 5, 2011 / 1:32 pm

        thank you! 😛

    • tskraghu June 29, 2011 / 8:23 pm

      Nice play on ‘the unwanted guest’ and its avoidance!

      • Alyssa July 5, 2011 / 1:32 pm

        lol, my pleasure.

    • Alyssa July 5, 2011 / 1:33 pm

      Well, I’ve never had one but i’ve seen cattle liver that has.

  2. Ryan June 30, 2011 / 4:38 am

    Lol. I have to wonder how you come up with these terms! Really clever angle, Alyss!

    • Alyssa July 5, 2011 / 1:32 pm

      Never underestimate a twisted mind.

  3. tara tyler June 30, 2011 / 3:13 pm

    is there a cure? besides to stop drinking?
    good one!

    • Alyssa July 5, 2011 / 1:32 pm

      Drugs, lots and lots of drugs, lol.
      In cattle they give them levimasol.

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